a little too long but with some good BDSM scene.  3 out of 5

Great story.  Hope there are more from this author  5 out of 5 
(Bigrdr)

Excellent tale of S&M, FF Sex Slave Training and witchcraft.  The
entire story was exceptionally paced and well plotted.  Look forward
to more stories from this author.  5 out of 5  (Les)

Excellent as ever. Dark pen has the ability to build plot and yet
still keep the sex flowing. The concept is great and I can't wait for
the rest of the series. His best work so far!  5 out of 5  (Qwert)

Excellent story, but far too long.  A sequel would be good.  5 out of
5

Not my cup of tea but a very good story. It takes a while to develop
but a fairly good read.  4 out of 5  (Stark47 )

too bad this book does not published in Microsoft reader.  4 out of 5

excellent as all dark pen books!  5 out of 5

I do love DarkPen's work. I have purchased each of his books so far
and look forward to many more.

This one isn't as strong on the plot as the others (I especially loved
Office Games) but I still enjoyed the story here.

I strongly urge anyone who's looking for a story with a female
submissive and don't mind the scenes being quite strong to consider
this one. And if you buy any of DarkPen's books you're not going to be
disappointed. 

P.s. I do not know, nor am I affiliated with DarkPen as much as it may
sound like it :)  5 out of 5  (GwaiLo)

Went a little over the top on the nasty part.  Should have said
something about it in the description  2 out of 5  (scooby)

Very imaginative premise,with strong, varied and very hot action. Easy
to recommend this one!  4 out of 5  (Eljay)

Great book, strong characters, super bdsm, good story, told from the
sadistic dominant male...great read!  5 out of 5  (Edsubject)

You have to be careful in writing a story about the authors of erotic
stories.  Dark Pen has done just that with Office Games.  Brad, a
writer of hard BDSM stories, discovers that one of his coworkers,
Donna, reads and fantasizes to his stories.  He then takes steps to
have her submit to him online, without letting on that he's really
just a few offices down the hall.  What follows is incredibly hot and
well written.  Pen has given us a wondefful look at online D/s and how
it can be almost as rewarding as in person play.  While the ending is
just a little too tidy, the story is excellent over all and well worth
the time and money you'll put into it.
  5 out of 5

Well structured and a believable scenario.  5 out of 5  (Xarge)

This is a totally awesome story.  I really liked the scenes and the
build up of the relationship between the two characters both
professionally and on the internet.  I LOVED all the things he had her
do.  I'm seriously considering reading this again even though I only
bought it 3 days ago (and read it yesterday).  It's pretty much every
inexperienced sub's wet dream.  And the flow of the story is
phenomenal, it doesn't drag in any place and it gives enough details
to be believeable. Although I wish the story didn't end where it does.
 I'd totally be into reading the In Real Life happenings of this
couple, cuz I seriously want to know what happenes next, an absolutely
amazing read.  Here's to hoping the author some day decides to
continue this story.   5 out of 5  (LilGray)

excellent  5 out of 5